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I’m going to guess Zero’s, right? Love the way you worked Kaname’s hair–it’s his best feature.
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wforthes commented on Zero sleep tonight. 4 days, 6 hours ago · View
Whoa! What a great illustration of the boys together and the bracelets are a great touch. Keep it coming! I would love to see more work of yours.
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wforthes commented on Pocky Love. 2 months, 3 weeks ago · View
They look so young here. Kaname reminds me of Senri in this drawing. Good job.
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wforthes commented on Feel with your heart 3 months ago · View
Excellent storyline overall and a great opening to the story with the motel/hotel scene. I sense that english is not your native language. I would love to edit your work for you to improve the flow of the story. Your work incredible potential. Let me know if you are interested. I’m adding ‘Feel with Your [...]
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wforthes commented on The Vampire Hunter. 3 months ago · View
OMG! Wonderful illustration of Zero in a blood haze.
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wforthes likes sagakure‘s challenge, Zero x Kaname yaoi challenge 4 months, 2 weeks ago · View
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wforthes commented on Zero x Kaname yaoi challenge 4 months, 2 weeks ago · View
Thanks for giving us the strong detail to the story. It will reduce the number of ‘paths’ I can take and therefore easier to write. I’ve got something like this in mind so I should have no excuse but of course I’ve to fit it into everything else I’m doing.
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wforthes commented on One kiss, one taste of you 4 months, 3 weeks ago · View
Whoa! Music choice was brilliant as well as the image choice and sequencing/flow. Very impressive.
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wforthes commented on At a Certain New Years Party 4 months, 3 weeks ago · View
You have a collection of really great sentences, my favorite is –Zero turned to Kaname with an incredulous look on his face that quickly turned into a menacing grin.–You might want to work on your secondary, background sentences which will help fill in your story as well as help gain control over your story’s timing [...]
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wforthes commented on Bloody rose 4 months, 3 weeks ago · View
Love the way the hand sits so naturally on the gun. Great job on the use of the outlining. Excellent work!
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wforthes commented on Vampire Yuuli 4 months, 4 weeks ago · View
What a powerful image of Yuuki as Pureblood. Great use of the claw object in her hand. I love the way you used her foot and the long nails to balance the object in her hand. Light pencil strokes and yet a total power image. Great job! If you renamed your image with the correct [...]
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